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家庭教育 谁能给孩子的英语短文以合适的修改？
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发布时间：2007-02-04 08:02:13
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谢谢大家啦！~短文如下：
Last vacation I went to a beautiful beach,It was a very cool trip!
First day, On the beach,We were eating and drinking.We were very really happy and I was fond of this feeling!
Second day,The day was cool and I was very cold.Wo went to a beautiful mountain.I was very tired!
Third day,The day was very hot,so we went to a museum,It was king of boring,so I don't very enjoy it!
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Last vacation I went to a beautiful beach, which was a very cool trip.
Eating and drinking happily on the beach,I was so keen on this feeling.
After the first day came the second one.The weather was so cool that I felt very cold.And we went to a beautiful mountain.I was rather tired because of the climbing.
Finally,due to the hot weather,we went to a museum.But it was kind of boring.
In short,I didn't have a very good time during the trip.
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