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家庭教育 请找出信中错误的部分.并加以纠正!英语!
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发布时间:2008-04-22 03:49:18
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My love i donot know which photos i sent you beofore.have some photos I choose some of them for you.looking at photos and thinking about your voice, "Hi beautiful"! you seems like said that words. ahaha. You will always have good health if you do more sports and have right food. Fix house just a work but is not sports. Some real sports is good for health. run,yuga.play different ball, dance, If you run about one week every morning. you will feel very active.Fix house just can relax part of your body, run or yuga are can relax whole body. but you maybe have not so much free time to do sports. But have a happy mood each day is most important in life.Miss me more will give you a happy mood,hahahhah.will use my chinese name in email to your parents. I would like learn english from your emails.So you have to write right sentence to me. I donot know why sentence of your emails it is easy to remember. But let me remember the sentence at my school book is very difficult. I learn english from your emails is easy and happy. so if you wirte wrong english and i will learn wrong english. maybe i had computer at 6 years ago. but use internet maybe about 1 years ago.before most of time use computer for paper or forms.Now use computer write you and get some help from internet when i need, Also my computer is a TV, I watch news at computer. and some of my english class is teaching at computer. in shenzhen still little hot. now feel little hungry. Love you 休 闲 宝 贝 网
>>>>>>>>休闲宝贝网回答:
你这段英语有可能是从网上直接翻的。但你知道不知道,修改英语有时候比直接写还麻烦?既要猜出它的原意,又要尊重它的句式,等等。
你还不如把想要翻译的段落弄成几个小段,发上来,让大家帮你翻翻更自在!
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